Monday, July 16, 2007

Bulrushes #2


Permalink / posted by and copyright of Christina : 7:37 PM

Comments:
Given the fun we are having with titles perhaps this should have been called 'Ant'!

'tis the top left background that I find confusing.

The subtle colours are very attractive.
# posted by Blogger Rex : 8:43 PM
 

Very nice tonality, but the dew drop does not create the same suspense as the earlier image. And without a strong point of interest, the foreground out of focus parts now bothers me.
# posted by Blogger Doug : 5:05 AM
 
I'm happy with the top left but less so with the nearest OOF bunch above the water. The comparison in size between the ant and the drop makes the picture; and this drop is more interesting than the more conventional earlier one. But, despite criticism, it is gentle on the eye and revealing of nature.
# posted by Blogger John Ellis : 11:05 AM
 
I find it difficult to critique your nature work when I appreciate so much time and patience goes into the finished result. Again, this has an air of expectancy. I can live with the top left but I still need more stem and that bug to be much lower in the frame. Do bugs take well to being directed! It's still a superb piece of art though.
# posted by Blogger akikana : 1:02 PM
 
You could call this one ‘white water’. The picture is fully dominated by that one small patch.
# posted by Blogger Colin [auspiciousdragon.net] : 5:20 PM
 


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